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Next to last of my works on this site, delivered in time for Thanksgiving as promise. Don't quite remember who came up with this one

The original idea was to do a sequel to Ghost Reprogramming, though since this year is the year of Ghost In The Shell: Arise I wanted to do a story based on that. This is what I *was* doing, one that fit into the plot of Arise much like how Reprogramming fit in the plot of Stand Alone Complex. However, I got lazy doing the sex scenes and decided to adapt them from a GitS doujinshi i translated two years ago (don't look it up, they were my first translation jobs and i was still doing Comic Sans, having yet to discover Wild Words. It's an Old Shame). The sex scenes in question were threesomes, however, so aside from Lt. Col. Kurtz (Motoko's C.O. in the Arise OVA), whom i intended for this story from the beginning, I had to come up with an OC. First the idea was that the OC would be used as the medium of mind control, so she should be exotic and bewitching, so then the idea came up that the OC should be the source of the problem to begin with. This then led me to revise the plot significantly to something a bit more lighthearted in subject.

the mc in this one is very subtle, entirely about Motoko's obsession with Asha, up until Asha attempts to infect her.

Lt. Col. Kurtz seemed too obvious of a name choice for the Arise writers, but w/e.

As a final note, Kurutan and Ran are detailed here: www.motokoindepth.com/2010/08/… They're Motoko's roommates and the ones she works with on her side-job, selling recordings of their VR sexcapades.
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god, man that was erotic!!. how sexy is this? i mean you make my stories of erotica seem PG 13. you kick ass with the motoko love making stuff although it can be raunchy, it is rather sweet. who is this asha girl anyway? i get the fact the major loves women and i don't mind, i love it. beautiful yet steamy story, man!.